Francis Michael Buck

I thought this was a neat little quirky kind of poem. It's nice to see something that's not the same old serious dark stuff or whatever. I think you could ...

This sounds like it could be an interesting story and could definitely be developed into something. For starters I'd say the best thing would be to add more detail and ...

Awesome poem! I love when people get creative with formatting. In my opinion, when it comes to poetry in particular, rules are meant to be broken. Who needs structure when ...

This is very good for an early attempt. Screenwriting is tough and in many ways very different from normal novel writing. You definitely have talent and I'd like to see ...

This is an interesting idea. Like the poster before me said, I'm not very fond of prefaces/prologues, as more often than not they just seem like something that should simply ...

This was an interesting and unique idea. I'm not totally sure that I got it, or if there was something specifically to get, but either way I enjoyed it. Your ...

You're a very good writer! You have a lot of descriptive ability and it keeps the story moving and flowing well from paragraph to paragraph. I didn't think it was ...

This is a very good poem! I like the word choices, not overly fancy while not being overly simple either. It has a good flow to it and you create ...

It seems like a good concept, but things happen way too fast. We're barely introduced to the main character when suddenly the plot is taking off. This is a problem ...

A great program for automatic script-formatting is FinalDraft. It's expensive to buy, but you can download the demo on their website for free. It says it only lasts 15 days, ...

You seem to have a good idea going here. I like the use of real angel names, and the mention of the nephillim. Very obscure reference! I love it. The ...